Monday, August 16, 2010

Tasks for COM2033

Hello students COM2033. Welcome to my blog.
Here are 2 tasks for you to do this holiday.
a) Youtube : bad examples for public speaking (5 marks)
b) Reflections on the Speech outline ( january).Please write your comments not less than 50 words.( 5 marks)
Due date :20/9/2010

15 comments:

haniff said...

NAME: MOHD HANIFF BIN ZUHAIMI
ID NUMBER: BHD 09-01-891
CLASS: HND1 (1)

Assalamualaikum.

I have watched your video clip about the bad example of public speaking. This video is so useful because it provide speeches guidance for me. Thank you for the video.

By watching this video, I can improve my speeches with the guidance that have in this video. Several things that importance for me is dress appropriately. I agree with this point because our dressing will give the first impression for audiences. Appropriate dress and appearance will give a good impression for audience and also can increase the speakers confidence.

Then, the use of visual aid in speeches. The visual aids can help in speech because the audience can more understand the topic that discussed. But, the way of speaker use the visual aids is sometimes have a mistakes. The mistakes is the speakers use the visual aid to block their face from audience sight like the speaker in video does. Maybe the speaker do that to get confidence, but this will make the audience lost their concentration on speeches.

The third point is preparation. In this video, the unwell preparation cause the technology not running and spoil the speeches. To have a good public speaking, we must do an enough preparation in any factor like the content of speeches, the visual aid, the technology used, and another else. This because, we don’t want any un expectation happen during our speeches. So, we must make preparation for a success speeches and with enough preparation, we will gain high confidence level.

Thank you.

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Firdaus said...

NAME: MOHD FIRDAUS B MOHD PAUZI
ID NUMBER: BHD 09-01-890
CLASS: HND1 (1)

Assalamualaikum.

I have seen this video about the bad example of public speaking. It is very useful and the same time this video is interesting and funny for me.
By watching this video, can give me the guideline about public speaking especially the command mistakes that speaker always done.
Before we start our speech, we need to be sure that no other thing that can disturb us to continue our speech such as handphone. Like example, when the hand phone is ringing, we might be lost and not concentrate on our speech.
One of the bad example on this video is don’t eat while we perform our speech. It can make the audience judge us not respect them and this kind of behavior is not unforgiveable unless you need to do so.
Dress properly can attract the audience about the speech that we will going to perform. Dress also can increase the audience mood.
As a speaker, don’t staring outside, try to communicate with the audience through eye contact. Don’t be weird, that we can give the message from our speech through the eyes.
Last but not least, speaker cannot speak too fast. The audience might not get or understand about the speech and the other thing, a speaker should not repeat the same word many time. It can make bored to the audience.
Thank you.

MOHD ZULKIFLI JUSOH said...

NAME:MOHD ZULKIFLI BIN JUSOH
ID NO:BHD 09-01-888
CLASS:HND1(1)


Assalamualaikum

I don’t know what to say about this video. I think this guy has become mad. The first problem that this guy is using his handphone while giving his speech. This is very bad. He must turn off his phone or make the phone in vibrating mode. So, when he is giving his speech, there is no other disturbance. The second problem that this guy has done is he is dressing with not properly dress. This will cause the audience looking on his cloth not listening to the speech and what this guy wants to give maybe the audience not hearing it.

The next problem that this guy has is filled pause speech. When he do it, he will not be has confidence while giving this speech. This can cause the audience feel his speech so boring and maybe there is the audience who sleep. The next problem is this guy is blocking his face with visual aid. This will cause the audience feel not confidence with the speaker. The audience will consider this guy is a shy person. The next problem is the technology that this guy using is not working properly. The audience will think this guy is not well prepared person.

The next problem is this guy is speaking with fast rate. The audience will not understand it and maybe there are the audience that will leave this public speaking. The next problem is not logic. If we are doing public speaking, the aliens will attacks us? Surely not. I don’t understand what the next problem. But, this guy must use appropriate timeframe. Next is this guy is eating while giving his speech. I think this guy do not have a well manner.

The next problem is this guy is over articulate while giving his speech. This will cause the audience will laugh when listening to his speech. The last problem is the big mistake. The speaker must not twist the fact. If he is doing it, the audience will consider the speaker is cheating. Cheating is not good manner. We also get sins if we cheating. So this guy must not twist the fact.

Lastly this video is not good. I only just giving zero star. Thank you.

Unknown said...

AL-ANIQ QUR'SHAM BIN RAMLY .
BHD08-07-783
HND1(1)

Assalamualaikum ,

I've watch your video of Bad Examples of Public Speaking . In this video , it's show the bad of speaking when doing a speech . It's true if when we want to do a speech , we should off a handphone and try to avoid from all interference . This is because , it will cause all audience not concentrate about our speech . We also must do a preparation before we start our speech or this will cause our speech with not enough of time to finish our speech completely . For the section of video also , we should not over acting on doing something such as shooting the alien . An action that he's doing are so nonsense and will make all audience feels annoying . When doing a speech , we also must dress properly and matching with the situation . This will show to audience on how we are look alike and we will feel more confidence to talk in front of audience .
Lastly , this video is really annoying but it can be a good way to teach people on how to make a good speech .

Thank You .

fatin said...

NAME:FATIN HAMIMAH BT JAMAL
ID NO:BHD 09-01-885
CLASS:HND1(1)

Assalamualaikum..

I already seen example of bad public speaking in web that u already give it. All video that I seen just now is very useful to guide me when I do my public speaking.

First problem at the speaker, when he speech at public,so many "uhmm umm" and quite bored for audience. Maybe he so nervous or he can't talk fluent English. Dot't use filled pause like that. It can make audience feel sleepy.

Second is,the speaker didn't alert with the audience attention. As speaker, we must try communicate with audience by using eye contact. It can make audience feel interesting to heard your speech.

Next, speaker didn't respect audience when cell phone ringing while speaker give the speech at public,and unforgiveable the speaker answer it in front of audience unless you need to do so. Before you do the speech, make sure your cell phone switch off or set as vibrate. Dress appropriately also important when you do the speech.Dressing is first attraction that audience judge. Dressing that suitable with your topic and environment. If u dress freak or jerk, the audience make your speech as funny story.

Next, in public speaking we are allow to use visual aid. But sometime,speaker didn't use use visual aid properly.The video shown that he use the visual aid and he block his face. This is not a good manner because the audience can't see your face.

Next, if you use technology in your public speaking,make sure that technology properly set up. because,if technology didn't work,the audience think that you're not prepare properly and wasting time to wait.

Lastly, it weird when the speaker didn't use proper rate when they do speech in front of audience. That's mean, a good speaker has already set their rate to speak and not so fast when they speech.In this way,the audience can understand what the speaker try to tell them.

Thank You. *_*

Shairah Azman said...

NAME:SHAIRAH BT AZMAN
ID NO:BHD 09-01-886
CLASS:HND1(1)

Assalamualaikum..

Hye mdm, I appreciated about you gave me a video about the example bad public speaking last two weeks. I watching the video don’t’s in presentation. This video show about mistakes@error happen by presenter.

Firstly,the video show about the appearance by presenter. The guy only wear are t shirt and jeans and cap also. So that it wrong in presentation. The appearance it important for presenter and it will give confident level by audience to presenter

second,the lack of cooperation is important in group presentation. This show how the group can manage their team and work together. In this video, the guys cannot give cooperation with other and it should make the audience is bore

Sometime the presenter is nervous and it will also effect to audience. When they nervous, they will not look the audience. So they will read the point and turn their body to look white board or read the book. It showed by the girls in this video.

next,the unwell prepared cause the technology not running and spoil the speeches.In this video show the speaker do not prepared well during their speech.The speaker still searching about the tools that they should use in the speech example like the visual aid, the technology used, and another else. This is show a bad behavior to a audience and wasting a audience time to wait for the speaker to prepared their speech.

lastly,the speaker should not answering a call during a speech. When something like a handphone is ringing in our speech it will disturbing us and we might be lost and not concentrate on our speech. It also can make the audience judge us not respect them and this kind of behavior is not unforgiveable.

Thank You =)

Siti Noratika said...

NAME:SITI NORATIKA BTE BAHARUDIN
ID NUMBER:BHD09-01-894
CLASS : HND 1(1)

I have already seen the bad speech video and I think I get many moral value after watch it. It not just a bad moral value but we can get many good improvement if we take it as our example and what we must know is the bad think can be as a good and new idea if we use it smartly.

Firstly, the problem about the phone. When do the speech phone must be silent because this problem can make the audience not concentrate and feel boring about the speech.

Secondly, the dress appropriately. Dressing also important when do the speech because this symbolize personality. If we orderly attire, the audience must be interesting and automatic they have an interest about the our speech.

Thirdly, don't talk to fast. This problem can make audience don't understand and make they bored about the speech.

Last but not least, this is must do preparation. When do the speech we must enough prepared about the speech in order that we wiil more confidence and courageous.The audience also have an interest to listen about the speech.

Lastly,we know that the video show the bad example of speech,so from here we have to remind that all the think that video show is bad and we don't have to do the same think.Speech like that can only give bored feel to audience.

Thank You.

Ismail Qayyum said...

NAME:ISMAIL ABDUL QAYYUM
ID Number:BHD08-07-801
CLASS:HND1(1)

Assalamualaikum,

Thanks madam for the great video that is so useful for us as a guidelines about what and what shouldn't we do in a speech.

I've watch the video and found that its suit its title,Bad Public Speaking Examples..this is because,the speaker has broke every rule of good public speaking criteria such as eats and he even use cellphone when giving speech.This shouldn't be done by any speaker because it can lead to the audience dis comfortable and will make the audience loose their interest in listening to the speech.

From the video,there are few things that i want us to be careful with..

For those who has a hand phone,please TURN OFF your phone while you are in the speech, or it will disturb your presentation.

Dress properly when you are giving a speech to show your self-confidence. Usually formal dress because it will attract audience to pay more attention to you when you're convincing them.

Use appropriate body language to make the audience get what are you trying to deliver to them.

Use correct intonation in order to let audience know your speech punch lines or main point.

speak moderately, not too fast and not too slow so that it will helps your audience to capture and understand the flow of your speech.

Show your confident through your speech.Audience will attracted to hear a speech from a speaker that seems like he really know,expert and already done a deeply research about the topic he's being giving speech about.

Unknown said...

NAME : LUFTI BIN MHD YATIM
ID NUMBER : BHD09-01-897
CLASS : HND 1(1) / 2010

Assalamualaikum...
huh! it's been really hard to load this video since my internet connection is very slow. But somehow I manage to watch it to the end with all the patient and excitement I got =).

Anyway, my first impression of what this video shows me is the presenter is totally make me laugh, and a lot. This video truly show me how possibly worse could happen with using bad method to present something.

I totally disagree with all the method he use to talk to the audience. For example; doing the presentation with carrying the pistol. Huh that is not appropriate and may cause chaos right? There is 12 way he choose and show to us and I totally agree with the title, "BAD EXAMPLE OF SPEECH". And I may have an idea how to change the title, give it "SUPER CRAZY EXAMPLE OF BAD SPEECH".

This video is very good in giving me great laugh, but at the same time also give many great example of what I should not do in giving my speech to the audience at later time. Tq Pn Emilia =))

mohd hafiz said...

NAME : MOHD HAFIZ BIN ANZAHARI
ID : BHD08-07-780
CLASS : HND1(1)

This video give me a guidance to be a good speaker.

we must turn off our phone before starting our speech.it is not good if we turn on phone because it will disturb the speech presentation.
we also have to set up the technology properly before starting the speech.
we also have to dress properly because from our appearance , it can make the audience feel comfortable with the speaker. we also have to dress properly depend on the speech and situation.
the speaker cannot eat while giving the speech. it will affect the attention from the audience if the title of the speech is not based on eating or food.
the speaker also have to set time for the speech to avoid from not too late or too fast.

Use visual aid properly.Don't block your face with the visual aid. This is because audience cannot see your expression when give the speech.

so we have to plan the speech before present it and do it seriously.

siti nabihah said...

assalamualaikum
SITI NABIHAH BT NORDIN
BHD0901883
HND 1(1)/2010

From the video Bad Public Speaking Example 3, I can see that she seems to rush. like she wants to end the speech faster. maybe due to the lack of confidence.she don't even look at the audience. she refer to the text from the start all the way till the end of the speech. this maybe due to lack of preparation. she looks bored. unwilling to present, like she's been force to perform. plus, it's also looks kinda annoying because she keeps placing her hands on her forehead and I think she was playing with her feet.

that's all I can say. thank you.

Sara Zainal said...

Name: SITI NORSARA ZAINAL
ID: BHD09-01-884
Class: HND1/2010

first of all, thank you so much madam for the funny and knowledgeable video. this video is quite interesting I can learn from the video how to give the good speech and not to do the bad thing when giving the speech

1. turn off the cell phone
b4 start the speech, you need to turn off or silent the cell phone because it can disturb your audience and make you lost your speech

2.dress properly
speaker should how to know the suitable dress up to build your character when you give a speech because the audience look more interesting with your speech.

3. don't use filled pause
if you always use the filled pause it can make audience feel bored with your speech and also look that you not confidence with your speech

4. use visual aid properly
do not use visual aid to cover your body of face. the most important is eye contact with the audience

5.do not eat during speech
do not eat when giving a speech because audience will lost their attention to your speech and it look an a appropriate proper manner.
thank you...

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shuhadah said...

thank you madam for having us watching the interesting videos of bad speeches. it gave us guidelines for the next speech that we will do to be a good speaker.

To be a good speaker you should have a self confidence. Start your speech with something that can give impact to the audience or something that memorable. It is important for the speaker to wear a proper attire to show that they are confidence with their self.

Secondly, don't use cellphone during your speech. As a good speaker you must show your credibility don't drunk the day before your event day.

Thirdly don't be too emotional till you disturbing your audience to concentrate on your speech. A good speaker knows how to attract their audience.

Last but not least, i think the most important to be a good speaker is should not be nervous and panic because it will effect on the concentration.

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